03 MAY

Banner for Stammering awareness !!!!!

You know guys in India there are one corore people are PWS so just spread this banner by facebook or by twitter or by mail and spread that You ar not alone come with Tisa and learn technique, lifeskills.

Post Author: Vishal Gupta

6 thoughts on “Banner for Stammering awareness !!!!!”

admin

(May 4, 2013 - 12:09 am)

poster is very good.
I think, in it we should add- all is free of cost & email id – [email protected]

admin

(May 4, 2013 - 3:53 am)

Hemanth's idea is good.

Vishal Gupta

(May 4, 2013 - 10:35 am)

yes.. actually ye maine apne liye banaya tha isliye maine email nhi diya… but yeah ek global banata hu jisme [email protected] ko bhi highlight karta hu aur Free of cost ka mark laga deta hu thankx hemant.. really it will extend the attention…

admin

(May 5, 2013 - 1:34 am)

one more improvement can be done – poster's background should be white or cream colour and text in dark colour.
As generally in school or college, house or offices, colour printer are less than black & white printers.

admin

(May 5, 2013 - 3:12 am)

I can see a lot of love and hard work has gone behind the poster..see if these changes can be incorporated..

1)"So you are not alone " ..looks like a direct conversion of hindi sentence " To aap akele nahi ho "..english language does not work that way .
2)"There are one corore peole who stammer in india

replace there with their ..replace corore with crore..
3)conversely any banner should not give an exact figure ..words like approximately..nearly..over…must be prefixed before the figure..
4)"so dont wait"..do not start with so..like we can in hindi..

I know english is a funny language..but lets not make it funnier 🙂